Review of Insomnia

The article is OK but it needs a lot of wiki-editing, this would of course not be a problem if this was Wikipedia, but since it is a Closed collaboration, you can't easily change it.

I'm thinking particularly of the misaligned text and the images that are edited to include text underneath, this is not an elegant solution.

Instead of this image I might have used a different solution


I might have done something like this instead this.
This has the advantage of both the image linking back to Flickr and the attribution being interactive.

It also preserves the image quality.